Dawn MartensResenhas

Mega angst.
Some may or may not view this book as containing cheating.
The so called 'hero' when he breaks up with his girl friend he goes back to a woman he previously had a relationship with. He doesn't see the two women at the same time but he and Lilly, the girl he is supposedly in love with are very on/off so when they are off he sees the o/w.
I feel in reality if he ever stuck with Lilly would he be faithful. If they had a row or a tiff would he run off to someone else.
You need to read book 1 and will need book 3 to fully understand this book and get a HEA.

I think this series is best read as a box set as you must read all the books to enjoy any of these and in order.
Story 1 and 3 are second chance romance. Book 2 is an on/ off relationship with the so called 'hero' returning to an ex when they are off.
It's a rough read, mega angst, lots of things that many readers will not agree with.
I felt in all the couples issues there needed to be more explanation between the couple when they decide to make a go of it. How bad things where for Eden with her father, for example explains why she did what she did that eventually causes the split. She tells the other women but there is no conversation between her and her man. This happens a few times and I kept waiting for it but it never happened.

A second chance romance.
You will need to read all 3 books to get a HEA. This book doesn't complete their story.
It also leads up to book 2.

This story is a completely weird set up.

You need to read book 1 and 2 to understand this book.
It's a second chance romance. The so called hero thinks his wife cheated, he treats her terribly and they split.
This is the conclusion of the 3 couples happiness from this series.
To be honest he's not very likeable, he treats her awfully and it's not just his treatment before they split and after but his attitude to her and what has happened.
The other couples also sort their issues.
This series is mega angst.

Lots of ex drama.
This was a mixed bag for me.
She had no reason to believe he would change but the constant on/off mostly due to other girls/exes etc was too much, if you are going to give it a go you need to give things a go, if there is an issue, talk things through instead of breaking things off or running away.
The heroine to me came across as immature.
The 'Hero' hid so much but how did he put it 'I didn't lie' but he omitted loads, not telling her the whole truth and leaving huge gaps. This makes it hard to trust him.

The situation in this book is so unrealistic. She finds out on her wedding day, at the reception that he has married her for ulterior motives not love and she agrees to stay. I can't see that happening. Anyway allowing for that I think it could have been a good story but as it's a novella there is not enough time to develop things that could have been explored further.
It's written with more than one perspective and the time line jumps from present day to several different points in the past of their marriage.
It feels choppy. I think it may have worked better to have events in order of how they happened in not really sure.
The so called hero is selfish and not very likeable for most of the story due to his treatment of the heroine.

The feelings in this story about the betrayal are very realistic. I liked she couldn't just say that it was okay and they'd work through it.

3 stars

I had high hopes for this. Unfortunately, I struggled with a large part of the story because the back and forth between the characters seemed childish and the drama was not needed. There was just too much outside influences which is sad because the potential was there for the characters to slowly grow and evolve.

I appreciate the author and her hard work but this book was not for me.

30% is as far as I can get into this. While UnLove Me has a great premise, and I usually love MC books, this one has far too many problems with timeline and alternating POV's. The writing itself is good, but I couldn't follow who all the characters were, within 30% you read from 6 or more characters, and weeks of time are skipped with no separation between one minute to the next. Unfortunately, I won't be finishing this book.

I loved the storyline in this book and how everything was so intertwined. I hated the fact that it jumped around so much and when she would go from talking about the male in that chapter to the female, it would change paragraphs but there was no break to let you know of the change. It made it really hard to follow in some parts and you were left scratching your head for a bit, like huh?! Overall, it is a really good book though, and there were a lot of surprises you didn't see coming. You gotta love a good MC book with lots of sex, happiness, angst, and suspense all rolled into one. I think it could have been told better, but it was decent.

I loved the storyline in this book and how everything was so intertwined. I hated the fact that it jumped around so much and when she would go from talking about the male in that chapter to the female, it would change paragraphs but there was no break to let you know of the change. It made it really hard to follow in some parts and you were left scratching your head for a bit, like huh?! Overall, it is a really good book though, and there were a lot of surprises you didn't see coming. You gotta love a good MC book with lots of sex, happiness, angst, and suspense all rolled into one. I think it could have been told better, but it was decent.

I love this book and series. I will be reading the rest of this series. The author reminds me a lot of Kristen Ashley!

There was no redeeming the zero - if he had managed to zip his pants after the h left, MAYBE I could have gotten past his crap - but that isn't how this one went - and the h.... what the hell? back in town for less than a day and she flops to her back for the zero - on the same desk zero f'ed her bff on. no.... just no

Had a blast with all the characters in this trilogy...Eden & Jasper are definite made for each other in Unkiss me and same with Lilly & Vincent in Untouch Me and last with Hilary & Mason in Unbreak This Heart definitely made for each other...it was definitely a great adventure with all 6 characters...Will definitely be recommending this book to my followers...everywhere like i do my other reviews...this is a definite 5 star for me! Thanks to netgallery for giving me the chance to read this wonderful trilogy...also to Dawn Martens keep up with the awesome books...will definitely be reading more!

Title: UnLove Me
Author: Dawn Martens
Publisher: D. M.
Series: The Angels Warriors Complete Trilogy
Reviewed By: Arlena Dean
Rating: Five
Review:

"UnLove Me" by Dawn Martens

My Thoughts...

What a trilogy read 'The Angels Warriors MC' series. It was such a pleasure to get three reads all in one read. This novel was wonderfully well written. I did find that to get the complete story you will have to read it in order. Book one ...'UnKiss Me' was of Eden's and Jasper's story. Book two...'UnTouch Me,' was of Lily and Vinny's and Book three 'UnBreak Me' was of Hilary and Mason's story. I loved how these the three stories intertwined with each other. Each one of these stories deals with a secrets that had been kept and handled. 'UnLove Me' is full of suspense, lies, infidelity, revenge, sexy steamy scenes along with all the drama,[dysfunctional family drama], mystery, misunderstandings, humor, and sadness that will keep you turning the pages till the end. It will not be hard to keep up with the three stories because the author will repeat some of the scenes from a previous book 1, 2, or 3. I will say I liked that for the most part of the stories being repeated as the story in that particular part of the book will flow and intertwine very well into the rest of the story.

All six of these main characters were quite some individuals with some being wilder and even living some real crazy lives but considering that this is a motorcycle group story, I guess that would be expected. Along with the characters being well developed, portrayed and somewhat believable the reader will get ones one intriguing story after it all said and done. Now, I will say be ready for a read that is 'brutally violent, abusive, emotional and downright hard to read at times,' but if you can get passed all of that and continue on to the very end of this story, one will find you have one heck of a good trilogy that I would recommend to you.

This book was provided as an ARC from NetGalley for an honest review.

Jenna (Ice) & Kidd

MC story with bad-ass bikers with good hearts, a few truly despicable characters, strippers, club hanger-ons, sex, love and everything that makes it a MC Club story.

I felt it dragged in the middle.

FYI: rape of a minor

!!!MY SHELVES CONTAIN POSSIBLE SPOILERS!!!

Loved the premise.
Could not put this book down despite the points I don't like.
Will definitely try this author again.

A fun read. I doubt real motorcycle clubs are this stereotypical, but as the backdrop for a romance novel, this club works well. The only bad part is predictable and skippable action "climax".

A fantastic read loved this book, but then again all the books by these authors are good. I really do recommend you get this.

A fantastic read loved this book, but then again all the books by these authors are good. I really do recommend you get this.

I received a copy in exchange for an honest review

This series is just getting better & better, book 1 was fantastic, book 2 even more so.

I loved the story between Daisy & Preach and how it was love at first sight and then he goes and ruins it all.

This love overcomes it all as they say your one true love is who who fight the most for.

I loved this sexy biker Preach and was heartbroken over his childhood but proud of how he protected his sister.

Daisy was a little timid at first but she came into her own and even though she was betrayed her love for Preach never died.

Once again a fantastic book 2 cannot wait for book 3

Get buying this book you will not regret it

I received a copy in exchange for an honest review

This series is just getting better & better, book 1 was fantastic, book 2 even more so.

I loved the story between Daisy & Preach and how it was love at first sight and then he goes and ruins it all.

This love overcomes it all as they say your one true love is who who fight the most for.

I loved this sexy biker Preach and was heartbroken over his childhood but proud of how he protected his sister.

Daisy was a little timid at first but she came into her own and even though she was betrayed her love for Preach never died.

Once again a fantastic book 2 cannot wait for book 3

Get buying this book you will not regret it

A fantastic read loved this book, but then again all the books by these authors are good. I really do recommend you get this.

A fantastic read loved this book, but then again all the books by these authors are good. I really do recommend you get this.