The situation in this book is so unrealistic. She finds out on her wedding day, at the reception that he has married her for ulterior motives not love and she agrees to stay. I can't see that happening. Anyway allowing for that I think it could have been a good story but as it's a novella there is not enough time to develop things that could have been explored further.
It's written with more than one perspective and the time line jumps from present day to several different points in the past of their marriage.
It feels choppy. I think it may have worked better to have events in order of how they happened in not really sure.
The so called hero is selfish and not very likeable for most of the story due to his treatment of the heroine. ( )