Christopher RichardsonResenhas
Autor(a) de You Ate That? (X-zone, Wright Group Readers)
Resenhas
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Now here are my complaints :
1. Too many characters.
2. Too much jumping around and poor descriptions of the action ( found myself re-reading parts over and over to try and work out what the author meant.)
3. Actual spacing of conversations is wrong - there should have been a new line for each characters' dialog instead of 2 characters dialog appearing on the same line so you think only one person is talking.
This book needed a SERIOUS edit!!! PUFFIN has dropped the ball. I am very reluctant to recommend it as a VPRC book due to poor editing.