M.H. Johnson
Autor(a) de Oblivion's Blade: A LitRPG Adventure
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Obras de M.H. Johnson
Gold & Glory (Dragonsign #1) 1 exemplar(es)
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Very nice cultivation story with the sly silver fox using the MC Alex to reach his goals.
Really cool concepts hampered by technical issues and character.
1) a lot of spelling and grammar errors, but nothing a proofread couldn't fix
2) Strange narrative structure. Takes 30% of the book to get into the meat of the story and then around 60% of the way through there's an extended flashback that just ruins all of the tension of the book up to that point.
3) Character dialog was often bizarre. The way they talked and reacted just struck me as strange more often than not.
1) a lot of spelling and grammar errors, but nothing a proofread couldn't fix
2) Strange narrative structure. Takes 30% of the book to get into the meat of the story and then around 60% of the way through there's an extended flashback that just ruins all of the tension of the book up to that point.
3) Character dialog was often bizarre. The way they talked and reacted just struck me as strange more often than not.
Continuity errors and an extended flashback in the first chapter. Too much for me handle.
Estatísticas
- Obras
- 19
- Membros
- 113
- Popularidade
- #173,161
- Avaliação
- 3.6
- Resenhas
- 5
- ISBNs
- 3
The story evolves in unexpected dimensions.
The MC meanders between super tough know everything and helpless.
Overall the story is good and the universe interesting.
BUT - there is a chapter in the middle of the book with some horrible self-justice story that is a) boring b) predictable c) stupid and also super not beliveable AND puts the MC in the light of being a super jerk. It gives nothing to the story but destroyes a lot of creditibility in that character.