This book reads like the rough draft of what could have been a really good fantasy novel.

The plot involves a mysterious figure called Grimm who creates a land where the inhabitants are forced to act out classic fairy tales, until Cinderella decides she doesn't want to marry Prince Charming and everything falls apart.

Unfortunately, there are frequent grammar and punctuation errors, run-on sentences, and absurdly overblown descriptions. ("Something deeper, darker, and much more powerful is working beneath the surface, toiling to put everything back the way it was intended.") ( )