Jurgen von Stuka

Some writers think that if they put a few additional unconnected sentences after every action and every dialogue this would make the reader feel that the book is written professionally . In reality, these unnecessary details only slow down the main storyline, and divert the attention of the reader from the current action. Hence, the entire story becomes boring. This is commonplace in Jurgen's writing.

Another issue here is that each chapter seems to have very lose connection to the previous one, and while reading the book, we never know which direction the story is going. Hence, there is no central story, but only the random scenes connected with each other by only thin line.

I would have rated it 1 star actually. But some of the scenes are good. So there is another star. But honestly, the book is kind of painful to read.
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