Ben Stovall
Autor(a) de A Tide of Bones (The Adventures of Redwatch)
Obras de Ben Stovall
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Estatísticas
- Obras
- 1
- Membros
- 7
- Popularidade
- #1,123,407
- Avaliação
- 2.0
- Resenhas
- 1
- ISBNs
- 2
At its heart, this book has a decent story but it's in need of a good editor. Several scenes, especially fight scenes, feel drawn out unnecessarily, to the point that I began skimming to the end of them. The dialogue feels artificial, and the characters need to be fleshed out as individuals. I think there's potential for a good good book here, but it's a revision or two away from that in its current state.