Esther Harshom

It's a short story with poor characterization and zero story buildup on a subject there would be at least a thousand properly written stories. Several of which are even posted at free portals by amateur authors, and are better than this.

Same issue here as well that destroyed parts one and two. Literally no buildup of characters or story. It's another smut written as we we already know everything about The Flowers Club and the character of Violet, but the other never bothered to build those two for us in the earlier parts.

There wasn't proper buildup for The Flowers Club in first book. What's irritating now, the character of Violet was not exactly main character in first book, and even in this book (where it's being used as main) the author decided not to build this character. Hence, it has also become another smut with purposeless scenes only.

A short story, more like a smut, without character development or proper buildup for 'The Flowers Club'. There is a climax to this short story though, for which I'm giving it two stars instead of one. But be frank, I'm kind of disappointed, as some people seem to like this author a lot.