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A bit long/some repetitive reading; would be easier to follow & feel less vague if the diary entries came with pseudonyms instead of just numbers.
 
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MsHeisserer | outras 74 resenhas | Jun 27, 2023 |
The story behind this book was incredibly inspiring, but I was hesitant to read it after I had watched the movie. 'No way could these kids' diary entries be that engaging,' I thought. I was totally wrong. I could not put this book down and read it all in one very long sitting. I do wish that the publisher had done less editing - it was obvious that the very first entries were written (or re-written) completely, and in the editing process much of the individuals' unique voices were lost.

What the Freedom Writers have accomplished, though, is amazing.… (mais)
 
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wisemetis | outras 74 resenhas | Jan 14, 2023 |
I enjoyed the unique presentation style and concept. I used the book (and film) in my adult ESOL class and they loved the language and stories. They enjoyed reading something contemporary that could be absorbed in small bites and discussed. It was filled with language and idioms that we use today and they loved learning the 'street English'.
 
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ColleenLVE | outras 74 resenhas | Apr 13, 2022 |
well i know this makes me a total asshole, and i don't mean this to say anything about the people or the work they're doing, but this book is objectively pretty bad. approaching terrible. i think it's all in the editing and their assumption that anyone reading this book already knows about them and what they're doing. also, their commitment to including everyone and all their stories, involving each child, while keeping it anonymous made their task of putting this book together more difficult, i'm sure.

and there are good things about it. i was worried that i'd find a white savior story, and it really didn't seem like that at all, at least not the way it was told. we get important stories of growing up in poverty, violence, danger, with drugs, gangs, violence all around. it is truly heartfelt. they do a relatively nice job of putting the diary entries of 140 or so people together in chronological order from freshman year to graduation to make a general arc of what went on in the four years of this class. (this couldn't have been easy or simple.) and it's important for people to understand that children in the usa go through these things, that we are not immune to this level of trauma, and that we can do something about it.

however. there are myriad problems with this book as it is written. i think it's largely the editing, because it was both obviously edited too much, and also not edited enough. the overblown prose was bad, but also ok in the end. i remember being that age and thinking that purple, mawkish prose was adult and quality writing, so i forgive these kids for writing that way. but some of the writing is obviously not theirs. it's probably edited for length or for understanding, but there's just no way some of these kids were talking this way. i know it's from around 20 years ago and slang was different then, but these essays just don't flow or feel true at all. (except for the experiences. those feel real and so it's a shame that the voices don't.)

we also see these kids change, but they tried too hard to show us this in each essay alone, rather than in an overarching thread that takes us from the first entry to the last. so instead we get things like "No one ever believed in me so I never believed in myself." and the next sentence would be something like "Now I know that I have to believe in myself and that I can do it." but there is no idea how they got there. Each entry is this story of hardship that is important to tell, and then suddenly they have self belief or understand their worth or something, but no information about how the change happened. (ex: "No one really understood what I was feeling. They were so caught up in what they thought about me that they didn't really care. It really bothered me that they didn't even try to understand me. Deep down inside I was just a scared little girl who was simply misunderstood. Maybe it's not so bad to be misunderstood. Now it's time for me to learn to hold my ground and be self-reliant." what??? how does this even happen. virtually ever entry is like this.)

and even more than that: what were they even doing? we are constantly told that the freedom writers have this amazing mission, that their work is important. but we are literally never told what they're doing. we aren't told how this class does anything that is radical or different, just that it is. we aren't told how this teacher makes a difference, just that she does. we aren't told what these kids do to change themselves, just that they do. we are told how important their message is, that it's so important that they're flown all over the country, interviewed by multiple news outlets, that they get all this corporate support and sponsorship because their work is so important, but we aren't ever told what their message is. something about tolerance? i literally don't know.

their work (the actual work they do and the work they did on themselves) sounds like it is something really important and quite amazing. i just don't really have any idea what it was and this book does a terrible job in telling us. so to be clear my rating has nothing to do with them individually or their organization, just this mess of a book.
… (mais)
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overlycriticalelisa | outras 74 resenhas | Jan 20, 2022 |

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