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This was much better as to the execution of the story. The flow was more consistent and the transitions were smoother. There were still some editing issues, but overall a much better delivery. The storyline was fun if not exciting and this time support characters were developed a bit more. The house moved into a strong character role, which was also fun if a bit mystifying.
 
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DragonJude | Oct 14, 2023 |
I would like to rate this book on two levels - the story and the execution of the story. The story is a fascinating idea with the potential to be a phenomenal series. 5/5
The execution is . . . mixed. 3/5
The writing moves from smooth and flowing to rough and unedited. The transitions are often abrupt and land the reader right into the next scene without context. The characters all have strong potential, but they are undeveloped. The MC of the Alpha has some development while the Omega has little. Support characters were introduced and then seemed to be forgotten - no checking in - an example is the retired sheriff in a corner under a pile of cloth - not to be mentioned until the end. So much left to the unknown.
Important scenes and minor scenes are both treated the same with little or no framing and the reader is jumped out with little closure.
… (mais)
½
 
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DragonJude | Oct 13, 2023 |
Well that was that. What the heck was that?
Great start - terrific idea - nicely developed start to a world and then -- stall out! No delivery. The characters and story had less development than a short story.
½
 
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DragonJude | Oct 1, 2023 |
This one has fewer holes than the previous two - probably because the others have built a type of foundation for me to work with. I feel like this is a good way for the author to end this series. The final reveal is just too funny and leaves the reader with all the 'what will be's that can follow. In addition, the readers no longer have to suffer through the inconsistent facts.
 
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DragonJude | Sep 19, 2023 |

Estatísticas

Obras
25
Membros
91
Popularidade
#204,136
Avaliação
½ 3.3
Resenhas
8
ISBNs
6

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