Fel Fern

The second book in the series is much like the first. In fact, there seems to be the same structure.

Again, this is a weird mix of super sweet fluff and dark. The content does not line up with the title, cover, or blurb.
Same weird holes and it is almost like the author forgets who is who and what she has said about them before. Editing errors are very present and everything is really underdeveloped. There has been no improvement between books 1 and 2. Not being mean or picky here - just an honest review, unlike the huge number of people who do not seem to realize that an author needs honest, solid feedback to improve. Reach out Fel Fern - you may be surprised at the wealth of skills waiting to help.… (mais)

This is a weird mix of super sweet fluff and dark. Not what the title, cover, and blurb led me to expect - which was dark and angsty. The idea and basic plot have all sorts of potential, but the story is undeveloped past the basic storyline. Characters are flat and there are weird holes. Overall, it reads like a first-time writer's effort. Again, the topics touched on are dark and could have really been developed, but they are not and the whole thing comes out sweet, fluffy, and HEA in a setting and plot that should not be any of that. Still going to read the second one, but HUH?.… (mais)