Priyanka C.

Not a very good story. I can get into some short stories and appreciate them for what they are. Even erotica can be enjoyable sometimes. But in this stories case, it spends enough time on the main couple that I wish the author bothered to create a real romance. Its a really cheesy, cliche set up for a romance, but I can get behind that. What I can't get behind is one of the characters sudden, abrupt change in attitude towards the main character.

It would have been so simple to fix this by just dedicating a few extra pages to character interaction. Even as erotica it wasn't really good because they failed to establish mutual attraction. Bottom line, not very good.… (mais)