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It's a long book comprising numerous scenes. And it's really painful and irritating to read this. Because the author has literally wrote this book considering the reader entirely stupid. Literally, nothing is in harmony in this. Numerous dialogues and character reactions are provided as if the main characters have recently started their relationship, but they're together since two years. It is said that the man is physically stronger, but many actions happen that are only possible if the woman is far stronger than the man. Man says he's a masochist. But his mental reactions do not match that idea at all. Happenings during many scenes are unclear, as if the author forgot to write a few lines. For example, woman is seated at his back, pinning him down, pressing his face on the couch. But the man can see her. But she can put a duct tape over his mouth instantly for shutting him up. And he can also look at her. The author seriously needs to read the story herself and see what she has written.… (mais)
 
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Zakfar_Magni | Apr 5, 2023 |

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