I just have to point out something interesting. That is the fact that Benulis' editor is Diana Gill. Now, it may not be a big deal to anyone else but me. However, my idol is Kim Harrison and through her I have recently come to thoroughly enjoy Vicki Pettersson. All three share the same editor. Sensing a pattern? I am, and it is a happy one. I must now endeavor to find all the other authors under Gill's editorial wing. I will admit that, comparatively, Benulis is my least favorite of the three but that does not diminish her in the least in my eyes. This is Benulis' first novel. I think she has real potential. Her world is interesting and has depths that have yet to be plumbed. I will be sticking with Benulis because it was a fun read and I believe she will only get better with time (plus reading her bio I see she is oneofusoneofusoneofusss and I always want us to succeed).

As for the thing that undermined her novel and caused me to only give it three stars, it is this: showing versus telling. It seems Benulis tells when she should show and vice versa. I am a discerning buyer. I always read samples and check the one-star reviews before I purchase a book. I noticed the complaints about not being able to connect with the main character or not knowing what was going on period and, as I read (for they were not enough to put me off given that I enjoyed the sample), I tried to understand why people have felt this way. I comprehended most everything but it did occur to me as I began to feel more for Stephanie and Naamah (who is decidedly my favorite character) than for Angela, that this is the reason why people felt disconnected. With the story being told from Angela's perspective, Benulis had to *show* the reader Stephanie's character through her actions--which did leave a much better and more personal impression of the character. This combined with the few chapters from her perspective allowed me to understand how she came to be who she was.

Sadly, I cannot say the same for Angela. We are *told* a lot of things about her, but that doesn't really tell us anything. We know about her past, her desires, and other things, but this doesn't really let us get to know her character. Things that should have been hard to swallow (like about her parents) and tragic had me shrugging my shoulders and saying whatever. I also found myself mystified by a lot of her behavior during the book due to the telling vs. showing. I had no idea what she would do at a given moment. I expected her to act differently toward Kim too. She is an interesting character and I wish I could have been able to know her better. Perhaps in the next book...

ETA: I forgot to mention that this story, while enjoyable, is not original in the slightest. For those familiar with Angel Sanctuary the same themes (and indeed angels--hello dear Rosiel, nice to see you alive and well here! And is that a reverse Alexiel/Setsuna? Why yes, I think so. And I'm sure there are more, but I haven't read AS in about a decade.) are easy to spot here. ( )

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Liked what there was of sample; may not like if as dark/grim as might get or if too much YA. As it is, like with most "angels" in paranormal books, "angels" are just a powerful paranormal race versus redemption and obeying God's orders type of stuff and from what I can gather from sample in this case are both the good guys and the bad guys; a potential "clique" or mean-girl type of situation which could turn it too Young Adult/Teen for me. But interesting and well enough written (yup, I've been fooled before with good, well edited samples but like enough to eventually buy and try to read).

Ugh, this book was terrible. It had such promise, great cover, intriguing storyline. But unfortunately it fell very short of my expectations. I couldn't keep the characters straight. I could never quite picture the location of the events, and frankly much of it was convoluted and confusing. There were parts I had to completely reread because I simply didn't know what I had just read. If it had another 100 pages of description and character development it might have been bearable. I won't be reading anymore in this series. ( )

Many books draw the reader in and keep them turning the page making it hard to stop reading but this book almost seemed to push the reader out. The writing, especially at first, felt awkward and disjointed and I had to fight the impulse to give up reading it and move on to something else. I was curious about some of the passage like the prologue so I forced myself to stick with it and it did get better and more interesting, but it was not very well written imo. Some interesting ideas but it didn't seem to flow together very easily. The characters were confusing especially with them often being more than they appeared, either through reincarnation and/or possession, and sometimes it was difficult to keep straight who was who or what. The Supernals like Israfel were often described as so powerful that it seemed no human or even half-human could stand against them, They were described as being able to take a life with a thought and seemed able to mesmerize and control at their whim, yet at times much weaker characters seemed able to stand up to them in ways that didn't seem realistic if they had such enormous power. Some of the motivations of the characters were confusing as well, and it wasn't always clear why some of the characters were making the decisions they did or what their actual goal or reward was. Things didn't seem to be very well explained and I kept expecting things to become clearer the further I got into the book but it really didn't seem to happen. In fact, things seemed to become more muddled and confusing. That said, it was interesting and different and I did find myself thinking about it and wanting to see what was going to happen, so I didn't give it as low a rating as I might have with the way I felt at the start. I think it's one of those books that if a reader is curious about it they should give it a try and see if they want to make the effort to muddle through it. I'll be curious to see if the author settles in more and improves with the next book. ( )